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Imagin that you are standing on beach
looking at all your friends playing in the water
but you are standing in the shadow
from a thorn bush.
you want to go into the water whit your friends

you start to move
but when your skin toush the sunlight
it hurts and you move backwards
you hit the thorn bush,
it becomes alive  and start to draw you in

you struggle but
it hurts to much
at some point you give up
and stop struggling

as long as you don't try to get out
of the thorn bush
out to your friends
it docent hurt
but when you try
the thorn bush will tear your skin
until you cant handle the pain
you are alone
and there is no way out of the thorn bush.
I have a lot of issues....
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battlefieldHEDGEHOG Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is really good stuff, nicely written and executed, probably one of your best works yet! ^^
But in the future you should try to correct the spelling errors, since there are a few... ^^'
But very nicely done I like it a lot! ^^
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cskyth Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012
I know xD
and thanks :3
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LadyKatra Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
Beautiful
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Svitavotara Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
Lovely work :) Yes, yes! Push past that thorn bush!
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AzureYugiohVanguard Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
But sometimes you have to push through the pain that thorn bush inflicts on you because if you do, then you will not feel that pain again and you can be truely happy.

This is beautiful. Sad but beautiful. Fantastic.
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cskyth Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
Your right ^^
but no matter what the thorn bush will always be there waiting.
and thanks :3
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AzureYugiohVanguard Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
np! :D:D
Yes but if you can find people to help you get out of that thorn bush then it becomes harder and harder for that thorn bush to pull you in.
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cskyth Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012
Ones again your right ^^
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AzureYugiohVanguard Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
:blush:
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